Off-duty ICE agent shot after alleged assault at Fresno home
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An off-duty U.S. Immigration and Customs Enforcement agent was shot by a 72-year-old homeowner after allegedly assaulting the man and his daughter at a Fresno, California, home, according to local police accounts reported by several news outlets.
The Fresno Bee described the homeowner as defending his family and reported that no charges were filed against him. AZ Family reported that the agent was arrested and accused of assaulting the homeowner and his daughter while intoxicated. The New York Post also characterized the agent as drunk and reported that he had been sleeping on the family’s front lawn before the confrontation.
KMPH Fox 26 reported that a neighbor said police connected the off-duty agent’s fight with a woman to damage to his car.
HOW THIS STORY WAS MADE
Written from 8 articles, 1 with the publisher's own text; 8 independent newsrooms once syndicated copies count as one; this version written 24 h after the record first saw the story; the editor revised it.
- Publishers
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- Source articles
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- Given to the writer
- 8, 1 with the article's own text
- Independent newsrooms
- 8
- This version written
- 24 h after the record first saw the story
- Second model (editor)
- revised
- Publication gate
- passed
- Human review
- none
WHAT THE EDITOR DID
The second model checked the writer's draft against the same sources and changed it before publication. Struck words were in the draft; underlined words are its corrections.
WHAT IT FLAGGED editor revise: Delete the unsupported commentary about the limits of the available accounts. - "Further details about the sequence of events, the agent’s condition and the allegations against him were not reported in the available accounts.": This is commentary about what the source material does not report, not a sourced news claim.
THE DRAFT AND THE CHANGES
Off-duty ICE agent shot after alleged assault at Fresno home
An off-duty U.S. Immigration and Customs Enforcement agent was shot by a 72-year-old homeowner after allegedly assaulting the man and his daughter at a Fresno, California, home, according to local police accounts reported by several news outlets.
The Fresno Bee described the homeowner as defending his family and reported that no charges were filed against him. AZ Family reported that the agent was arrested and accused of assaulting the homeowner and his daughter while intoxicated. The New York Post also characterized the agent as drunk and reported that he had been sleeping on the family’s front lawn before the confrontation.
KMPH Fox 26 reported that a neighbor said police connected the off-duty agent’s fight with a woman to damage to his car. Further details about the sequence of events, the agent’s condition and the allegations against him were not reported in the available accounts.
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