Cool Mornings and Warm, Sunny Afternoons Forecast Across Several Areas
publishers 24articles 33first reported 17 Oct, 21:00 UTCdeveloping since 18 Oct · 12 editions
Forecasters in several areas expect a continuing pattern of chilly or crisp mornings followed by warmer, comfortable afternoons. Outlets serving Columbus and areas covered by WAPT, WTOC, WBRZ, WTVA and KXXV generally called for chilly or cool mornings followed by warmer or comfortable afternoons. WDAM forecast a sunny and warm afternoon, while KBS forecast a chilly Thursday morning before a mild afternoon.
HOW THIS STORY WAS MADE
Written from 8 articles, headlines and summaries only; 8 independent newsrooms once syndicated copies count as one; this version written 72 h after the record first saw the story; the editor revised it.
- Publishers
- 24
- Source articles
- 33
- Given to the writer
- 8, headlines and summaries only
- Independent newsrooms
- 8
- This version written
- 72 h after the record first saw the story
- Second model (editor)
- revised
- Publication gate
- passed
- Human review
- none
WHAT THE EDITOR DID
The second model checked the writer's draft against the same sources and changed it before publication. Struck words were in the draft; underlined words are its corrections.
WHAT IT FLAGGED editor revise: Correct the geographic overreach and characterize each forecast only as its headline supports, while removing the unsupported claim about varying temperatures and timing. - "Forecasters in several parts of the United States": The source headlines do not establish that every forecast discussed, particularly KBS's, concerns the United States. - "Outlets serving Columbus and areas covered by WDAM, WAPT, WTOC, WBRZ, WTVA and KXXV generally called for sunny or quiet conditions": Most of these headlines describe cool mornings and warm or comfortable afternoons, not sunny or quiet conditions; WDAM alone only forecasts a sunny, warm afternoon. - "Specific temperatures and timing varied by location and were not detailed in the forecasts’ headlines.": The headlines provide no specific temperatures from which variation can be established, and several do specify morning or afternoon timing.
THE DRAFT AND THE CHANGES
Cool Mornings and Warm, Sunny Afternoons Forecast Across Several Areas
Forecasters in several parts of the United Statesareas expect a continuing pattern of chilly or crisp mornings followed by warmer, comfortable afternoons. Outlets serving Columbus and areas covered by WDAM, WAPT, WTOC, WBRZ, WTVA and KXXV generally called for sunnychilly or quietcool conditions,mornings followed by warmer or comfortable afternoons. WDAM forecast a sunny and warm afternoon, while KBS forecast a chilly Thursday morning before a mild afternoon.
Specific temperatures and timing varied by location and were not detailed in the forecasts’ headlines.
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