One killed, six wounded in shooting at California Halloween store
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One person was killed and six others were wounded in a shooting inside a Spirit Halloween store at Solano Town Center in Fairfield, California, police said.
Officers responded shortly before 8:30 p.m. Friday and found seven people with gunshot wounds. Six survivors were taken to hospitals, with at least three in critical condition. Authorities had not released the victims’ identities and were still working to identify the person who died.
Fairfield police said Saturday that preliminary information indicated the shooting was a targeted incident involving one suspect inside the store. No suspect had been identified publicly, and investigators were interviewing witnesses and continuing to examine the scene.
“There is still a very active crime scene,” Police Chief Dan Marshall said late Friday. Police said areas outside the mall were not under lockdown and asked anyone with information to contact the Fairfield Police Department.
Fairfield is in Northern California, northeast of San Francisco.
HOW THIS STORY WAS MADE
Written from 8 articles, 3 with the publisher's own text; 8 independent newsrooms once syndicated copies count as one; this version written 6 h after the record first saw the story; the editor revised it.
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WHAT THE EDITOR DID
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WHAT IT FLAGGED editor revise: Correct the opening word of Marshall’s quotation to match the attributed source. - "“This is still a very active crime scene,” Police Chief Dan Marshall said late Friday.": The source that attributes this remark to Marshall quotes him as saying “There is still a very active crime scene,” while the “This is still” wording appears in a police statement and is not attributed to him.
THE DRAFT AND THE CHANGES
One killed, six wounded in shooting at California Halloween store
One person was killed and six others were wounded in a shooting inside a Spirit Halloween store at Solano Town Center in Fairfield, California, police said.
Officers responded shortly before 8:30 p.m. Friday and found seven people with gunshot wounds. Six survivors were taken to hospitals, with at least three in critical condition. Authorities had not released the victims’ identities and were still working to identify the person who died.
Fairfield police said Saturday that preliminary information indicated the shooting was a targeted incident involving one suspect inside the store. No suspect had been identified publicly, and investigators were interviewing witnesses and continuing to examine the scene.
“This“There is still a very active crime scene,” Police Chief Dan Marshall said late Friday. Police said areas outside the mall were not under lockdown and asked anyone with information to contact the Fairfield Police Department.
Fairfield is in Northern California, northeast of San Francisco.
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