20 abducted police recruits recovered safely in Kalat district
publishers 63articles 186first reported 4 Oct, 21:29 UTCdeveloping since 5 Oct · 27 editions
Twenty police recruits abducted while travelling from Kalat to Noshki have been recovered safely, officials told Dawn.
The trainees from the Kalat Police Training Centre were seized by armed men on Friday while travelling home for the weekend in a private van on the Quetta-Karachi Highway. They were later recovered in the Mangochar area of Kalat district.
A senior police officer said all 20 recruits were “safe and sound.” The abductors were not identified.
HOW THIS STORY WAS MADE
Written from 8 articles, 7 with the publisher's own text; 8 independent newsrooms once syndicated copies count as one; this version written 498 h after the record first saw the story; the editor revised it.
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- 8, 7 with the article's own text
- Independent newsrooms
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WHAT THE EDITOR DID
The second model checked the writer's draft against the same sources and changed it before publication. Struck words were in the draft; underlined words are its corrections.
WHAT IT FLAGGED editor revise: Remove the unsupported geographic detail and the commentary about omissions in the source. - "in Pakistan’s Balochistan province": The supplied source does not identify the province or country. - "no further details about the recovery were reported": This is commentary about what the source material does not report.
THE DRAFT AND THE CHANGES
20 abducted police recruits recovered safely in Pakistan’s Kalat district
Twenty police recruits abducted while travelling from Kalat to Noshki have been recovered safely in Pakistan’s Balochistan province,safely, officials told Dawn.
The trainees from the Kalat Police Training Centre were seized by armed men on Friday while travelling home for the weekend in a private van on the Quetta-Karachi Highway. They were later recovered in the Mangochar area of Kalat district.
A senior police officer said all 20 recruits were “safe and sound.” The abductors were not identified, and no further details about the recovery were reported.identified.
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