Four service members killed in fire at Canadian military base
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Four service members were killed in a fire at a military base in Alberta, Mark Carney said, according to The Times of Israel.
Dozens of people were also injured, KATU and ABC News reported. While several outlets described the incident as a fire, ABC reported that an explosion occurred at the military training base.
HOW THIS STORY WAS MADE
Written from 4 articles, headlines and summaries only; 4 independent newsrooms once syndicated copies count as one; this version written within the hour the record first saw the story; the editor revised it.
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- 4, headlines and summaries only
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- within the hour the record first saw the story
- Second model (editor)
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WHAT THE EDITOR DID
The second model checked the writer's draft against the same sources and changed it before publication. Struck words were in the draft; underlined words are its corrections.
WHAT IT FLAGGED editor revise: Remove the unsupported title and timing and avoid attributing the “major fire” characterization to multiple outlets. - "Canadian Prime Minister Mark Carney said Sunday": The supplied source material identifies Carney but does not support his title or the day of his statement. - "several outlets described the incident as a major fire": Only the BBC source title characterizes the fire as major; the other fire headlines do not.
THE DRAFT AND THE CHANGES
Four service members killed in fire at Canadian military base
Four service members were killed in a fire at a military base in Alberta, Canadian Prime Minister Mark Carney said Sunday,said, according to The Times of Israel.
Dozens of people were also injured, KATU and ABC News reported. While several outlets described the incident as a major fire, ABC reported that an explosion occurred at the military training base.
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