L. K. Advani discharged from Delhi hospital after health improves
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Bharatiya Janata Party veteran L. K. Advani was discharged from a Delhi hospital after his health improved, The Hindu reported.
Advani had been admitted to Apollo Hospital with a chest infection and was kept under observation, according to The Indian Express.
HOW THIS STORY WAS MADE
Written from 2 articles, 1 with the publisher's own text; 2 independent newsrooms once syndicated copies count as one; this version written 62 h after the record first saw the story; the editor revised it.
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- Source articles
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- 2, 1 with the article's own text
- Independent newsrooms
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- This version written
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- Second model (editor)
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- Human review
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WHAT THE EDITOR DID
The second model checked the writer's draft against the same sources and changed it before publication. Struck words were in the draft; underlined words are its corrections.
WHAT IT FLAGGED editor revise: Delete the sentence commenting on missing treatment details; the remaining claims match the source headlines. - "No further details about his treatment were reported.": This is commentary about the limits of the supplied material rather than a sourced news fact.
THE DRAFT AND THE CHANGES
L. K. Advani discharged from Delhi hospital after health improves
Bharatiya Janata Party veteran L. K. Advani was discharged from a Delhi hospital after his health improved, The Hindu reported.
Advani had been admitted to Apollo Hospital with a chest infection and was kept under observation, according to The Indian Express. No further details about his treatment were reported.
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